The 1st Cut

So as promised Im uploading the video of what I showed for the first cut as we speak!!!
I was quite gutted by the feedback... I got the majority of it, but when they moved on to discuss the puppets and sets it felt like a kick in the teeth! But I shall push forwards and improve on what has been said! They said it had low production values... =( Now id spent weeks and weeks making these things, so I wasnt best impressed with these comments... I get some of them which I will definately improve on, next step is to Buy some dark varnish, to touch up the balconie some of the edges dont look good atall... And also the doors need touching up! Apart from that I think alot of it is down to the camera... it made the picture so dull and dead... It was depressing to look at...

So things to be addressed! But heres the 1st cut of what I handed in;



Also a big issue is the sound... I will be working on the script shortly! Hopefully improving it a hell of alot! Apart from that I just need to get this properly filmed... To the best that I can!!! So Im off to animate once again!